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Re: You Are Loved
Okay. Iam not exactly sure what to critique in this poem. I'm so sorry. Ihave not learned a lot about how to correct little things in every poem. I wish ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: A Dream
I look out the window, and see you standing there. Wondering why you're here. This way, it's very rare. I see you often in the hallways. I see you in ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: You're wrong, Teacher.
Okay I liked this. I'm sorry, but I don't know the meaning to have of the words you have used. Which, really that should be a compliment because I have ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: The One I Love
Hello. I loved your poem. It was sooooo sweet!!! I often write about guys, well, a certain guy, that I have gone out with. I recently started writing and yet ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Chapter one of my werewolf story (need title)
I know it may not seem like it, but I wrote this poem a while back. "My Love For You" was written when we were still together and I was ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The New Guy
You always make me laugh. You never make me cry. Please don't let these final words be my last goodbye. More that expected, you're really a nice guy. I like ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Him
Thank you for your feedback. My poem "It's Over" is reality. Umm I wrote that to my ex-boyfriend to break up with him and all of it was true. I ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: If I Had Another Drink
I liked your poem. It made sense and yet you didn't give too much information. That is mainly what I do. I look in the mirror and start talking and ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Do You?
Thank you for your feedback. Now the reason I don't always tell exactly what is going on is that I don't want to tell a lot about it most of ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Anonymous Disaster
She leaves an evil residue as she creeps down the halls. Out of the dreadful school, I'm the one she wants to fall. She still continues with her daily life. ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: through it all
I may be one of the few people [ or so it seems] to review this poem. Even though this may be true, I like it very much so. It ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Just The Way I Like It
Wow! I can't believe that! That is an amazing point of your opinion. It is unusual that I read things like these. Although I like my stanzas, I like your ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Him
I liked your poem. It's pretty. Short, but Pretty. I usually write poems based on guys [well a certain guy that ,stupidly, I dumped.] and they end up turning out ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
awww. I like this one too! Although I'm not so sure what leers means but still........good job. I like your poems. You make me feel like a wanna be. haha
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: I Want You Back
You were there for me a little while back. I wish I could talk to you because now, my world is wack. I broke up with you 'cause I loved ...
Dec 16, 2008
